Thank you for taking great risks and breaking rules… you know how tough it is to make a scroll now! Very inventive but not without issues: graphically you have a much larger area to take on, and it becomes an issue now, not of pages, but of a long artboard, making it a stretch to even think about discrete pages such as you get in inDesign. I would not have, for example, devoted quite the same amount of space you did to the flash drive in the center. I would have, for example, found a way to use ground space to make the text more autonomous (separated from the images the text areas are just a bit too close to).
That said, you did sweat the physical details: bars to roll the scroll, a flash drive instead of cd, and a tube instead of a sleeve… all conceptually well thought out. Great semester, Matt!
Thank you for taking great risks and breaking rules… you know how tough it is to make a scroll now! Very inventive but not without issues: graphically you have a much larger area to take on, and it becomes an issue now, not of pages, but of a long artboard, making it a stretch to even think about discrete pages such as you get in inDesign. I would not have, for example, devoted quite the same amount of space you did to the flash drive in the center. I would have, for example, found a way to use ground space to make the text more autonomous (separated from the images the text areas are just a bit too close to).
That said, you did sweat the physical details: bars to roll the scroll, a flash drive instead of cd, and a tube instead of a sleeve… all conceptually well thought out. Great semester, Matt!